These conversations on the problems of student writing remind me of the
famous Pogo cartoon, "We have met the enemy...and it is us!"
Take a look at the memos and documents on any campus, or in any
organization, and you see plenty of reasons why students write so
poorly. They're simply following our example. Academic writing is full
of passive voice, obfuscatory phrasing, and jargon. Academic journals
contain some of the worst writing one could find. If they get clear
writing they turn it down because it must be too simple, and not
sufficiently "rigorous." In one of my fields, the Journal of Marketing
and the Journal of Marketing Research are nearly incomprehensible.
So, for students, we shouldn[t really complain about their writing.
They've receive poor grounding in the elementary and secondary schools,
and they have poor examples to guide them. The wonder is they write as
well as they do. Given their background, our job is an extraordinarily
difficult one.
Research has shown that the two most important contributors to improved
writing are a) rewriting and b) commentary by many concerned readers.
This means we must give them the opportunity to correct what they do.
One-time assignments are not that effective. And we must try to get more
of our colleagues to do the same, i.e. employ writing assignments in
their course requirements.
Not an easy task.
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